You know you're on the right track when people's comments are about the most minute of things! That being said...
I feel the cursor is too hard. The corners ought to be rounded out a little and add a touch of shading to give it some more depth. Don't completely loose the contrast between the screen and the cursor, but the cursor out to bear some relation to the rest of the design... particularly the buttons.
Thank you both so much for your ideas! Yes, I should try to give more variation to the clouds. As for the cursor, this could be simple to - if there´s any time left, that will be on my wishlist.
I like the second one a lot. It has a very "child's toy" look with it's big buttons and bright colors.
It makes me wonder if it wouldnt be better to have bigger items in the first screen to keep that feeling alive? Everything is bigger in the second screenshot. Doesnt it break the consistency a little bit?
You might have a point: things look much bigger in the second environment. Curiously, I guess this gives them the "small picture" (the flower) opposed to the "big picture" (the garden).
But I´ll try to keep my eyes open to this kind of inconsistencies (I was not paying attention to them, actually)
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Just out the door to catch a plane, but I like the general aesthetic at work here.
Maybe you need more than one cloud in the background skyline? But this is surely a trivial matter. :)
Best wishes!
You know you're on the right track when people's comments are about the most minute of things! That being said...
I feel the cursor is too hard. The corners ought to be rounded out a little and add a touch of shading to give it some more depth. Don't completely loose the contrast between the screen and the cursor, but the cursor out to bear some relation to the rest of the design... particularly the buttons.
Thank you both so much for your ideas! Yes, I should try to give more variation to the clouds. As for the cursor, this could be simple to - if there´s any time left, that will be on my wishlist.
Again, thanks!
Quite nice!
I like the second one a lot. It has a very "child's toy" look with it's big buttons and bright colors.
It makes me wonder if it wouldnt be better to have bigger items in the first screen to keep that feeling alive? Everything is bigger in the second screenshot. Doesnt it break the consistency a little bit?
Overall, very good.
Hello Kevin! thanks for the input.
You might have a point: things look much bigger in the second environment. Curiously, I guess this gives them the "small picture" (the flower) opposed to the "big picture" (the garden).
But I´ll try to keep my eyes open to this kind of inconsistencies (I was not paying attention to them, actually)
Take care!
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